请帮忙看下我的CV, 这样写可以吗??
Dear Sir or Madam:
Your advertisement for sales designer in august 30 THE TIME interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.
I am fresh grad from NAFA; the course is Fashion Merchandising & marketing, basically I can do the designs are able to fit the marketing needs. And more information will in my resume.
I will appreciate the privilege of an interview. And if you need call me: 90782913
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Have a nice day
Daincy, He Ying